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| DATE | 2015-02-12 |
| FROM | Ruben Safir
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| SUBJECT | Re: [NYLXS - HANGOUT] And another thing
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On 02/12/2015 02:57 AM, Rick Moen wrote:
> Some badly worded passages remain that would require help from you,
> the author, to fix, as I am unclear on your intended meaning. (To
> pick two examples, 'has spurred communities' doesn't mean anything,
> and it's unclear what you meant, and I have no idea what the reference
> to 'BLINK' refers to.) Truncated URLs were already truncated as
> received here, so I could not fix those. All of the many
> spelling/typing errors have been fixed. About those: Ruben? For
> heaven's sake, please start using a spelling checker, as one would
> have caught almost all of your typos. I can strongly recommend GNU
> aspell, for example.
>
>
> It's Just Not That Easy
> Jan 4, 2015
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> The New Dot-Com Boom:
> http://readwrite.com/2014/12/30/learning-to-code-2014-tech-education
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> [snip rest of your essay that I copyedited for you]
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>
Michael that reminds me of two things actually.
One, Rick needs credit for copy editing for that when it is published
and you should
have that because I sent it to your email address.
Secondly, we need to look over the URLs on that paper before it goes to ink.
So we should have
One Article on SOC - Maneesh
One Article that needs heavy editing on PCI Express routing - Kamran
One Article on GNU in Education which Rick edited - Ruben
One Article on UEFI - Ruben
One Article from Paul on his Software: first part in a series on CIM
the sane replacement for SNMP - Paul Robert Marino
Roberton CyanogenMod - Robert Menes
It would be nice to get one more article at least...
On that note, actually, we might get on on the Alphaone labs... which is
the next email I''m sending out.
Ruben
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