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DATE | 2004-11-25 |
FROM | Ruben Safir Secretary NYLXS
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SUBJECT | Re: [hangout] NYLXS Open House Flyers
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> Cut the paragraph about "saving the masses" and > "technology ignorant government". Especially lose > the "... and do not profit off of the money". > It's incorrect usage. Really, just get rid of the whole > paragraph, as it's redundant with the top paragraph anyway. > You shouldn't claim that the course "will take you through > Perl's underlying structure", because it will almost certainly > not. I'm a programmer, and _I_ don't know what that means, unless > it refers to Perlguts, which would be a pretty advanced CS class. > > > Final suggestion, I promise... > > Print little vertical fringes along the bottom (or the side) > with the URL or tel#, so that people can tear one off to > take with them. Make them small so there can be lots of them. > ____________________________
I agree with the Mayor of Red Hook.
Ruben
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