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| DATE | 2003-10-09 |
| FROM | Billy
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| SUBJECT | Re: [hangout] Edited and Proofed
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On Thu, Oct 09, 2003 at 10:29:20AM -0400, Billy wrote:
> > The Student Union Penthouse, one of the secret jewels of New York
> > City, and Whitehead Library, are being used for the developer???s
> > sessions.
This sounds like you're listing three places. It's bad usage.
Suggest:
Developer's sessions will be held in The Student Union Penthouse and
Whitehead Library (the Student Union Penthouse is one of the secret
jewels of New York City).
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