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DATE | 2003-10-09 |
FROM | Billy
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SUBJECT | Subject: [hangout] Re: Press Release For Immediate Release
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On Thu, Oct 09, 2003 at 11:54:01AM -0400, Mike Richardson - NYLXS PRESIDENT wrote: > > GNOME Developers Summit November 22-24, 2003 > > NYLXS, in conjunction with the GNOME Foundation, is proud to announce > the 2003 GNOME Developers Summit at The City University of New York > Brooklyn College. > > > Speakers will include Richard Stallman and prominent members of The > GNOME Foundation on Saturday November 22, 2003 starting at 9am. > > > The Student Union Penthouse (one of the secret jewels of New York City), > and The Whitehead Library, are being used for the developer's sessions.
Nope.. bad use of commas and tense..
Try:
The Student Union Penthouse (one of the secret jewels of New York City) and The Whitehead Library will be used for the developer's sessions. ____________________________ NYLXS: New Yorker Free Software Users Scene Fair Use - because it's either fair use or useless.... NYLXS is a trademark of NYLXS, Inc
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