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DATE | 2003-10-09 |
FROM | joev_nylxs@pipeline.com
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SUBJECT | Re: [hangout] Re: Press Release For Immediate Release
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GNOME Developers Summit November 22-24, 2003
NYLXS, in conjunction with GNOME Foundation, are proud to announce the 2003 GNOME Developers Summit at The City University of New York Brooklyn College.
Speakers will include Richard Stallman and prominent members of the GNOME Foundation on Saturday November 22, 2003 starting at 9am.
The Developers' Sessions will be held at the Student Union Penthouse, one of the secret jewels of New York City, and Whitehead Library.
The NYLXS Benefit Dinner will take place Saturday November 22, 2003 from 6pm-10pm at the Brooklyn College Student Union???s executive lounge.
For more information and to register, go to www.nylxs.com/events.
NYLXS - We are Doers!
-----Original Message----- From: Billy Sent: Oct 9, 2003 12:09 PM To: Mike Richardson - NYLXS PRESIDENT Cc: hangout-at-nylxs.com Subject: [hangout] Re: Press Release For Immediate Release
On Thu, Oct 09, 2003 at 11:54:01AM -0400, Mike Richardson - NYLXS PRESIDENT wrote: > > GNOME Developers Summit November 22-24, 2003 > > NYLXS, in conjunction with the GNOME Foundation, is proud to announce > the 2003 GNOME Developers Summit at The City University of New York > Brooklyn College. > > > Speakers will include Richard Stallman and prominent members of The > GNOME Foundation on Saturday November 22, 2003 starting at 9am. > > > The Student Union Penthouse (one of the secret jewels of New York City), > and The Whitehead Library, are being used for the developer's sessions.
Nope.. bad use of commas and tense..
Try:
The Student Union Penthouse (one of the secret jewels of New York City) and The Whitehead Library will be used for the developer's sessions. ____________________________ NYLXS: New Yorker Free Software Users Scene Fair Use - because it's either fair use or useless.... NYLXS is a trademark of NYLXS, Inc
____________________________ NYLXS: New Yorker Free Software Users Scene Fair Use - because it's either fair use or useless.... NYLXS is a trademark of NYLXS, Inc
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